Smiling, but Breaking

I do not own nor do I know the person in this picture. I found it on the internet and wanted to draw it so I did. Then after I drew it I wanted to redo it on my Manga studio so I did. Lol. Hope you guys like it. This is the first art piece    I got done in Manga studio and I like how it turned out. FRIENDLY Critiquing is allowed, but please do not be mean.